雅思范文作文(优秀20篇)

雅思范文作文(篇一)

雅思小作文写作万能模板1、通过第一个曲线图，我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。)There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________.3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图，许多人______，然而其他人倾向于___Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.4、目前，共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.5、(图表所示)_____，就像许多其他事物，被____更加喜爱，然而这一观点正被________所抨击，一些人认为_________，他们指出_________________________, just like many other things, are preferred by ____________.While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.1 according to the chart“`2 the date lead us to the conclusion that“`3 the date show“`4 the tree diagram reveals how“`5 the figures show“`6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of“`7 the pie graph depicts“`8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding“`9 the table shows the changes in the number of “` over the periodfrom “`to “`10 as is shown in the table “`11 from the table ,we can clearly see that “`12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from “` to ““13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in“`14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the flutuation of “`15 over the period from “`to “`the“`remained level.16 in the year between “`and “`.17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008.18 the number of “` remained steady from “`to ““.19 the number sharply went up to “`20 the percentage of “` stayed the same between “` and “`21 the percentage remainede steady at“`22 the percentage of “`is sightly large than that of.23 there is not a great deal of differece between “`and “`24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of “`25 “`decreased year by year while “`increased steadily.26 there is an upward trend in the number of “`27 a considerable increase occurred from “`to “`28 from “`to “`the rate of decrease slow down.29 from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the“`reaching a figure of.30 be similar to “`be the same as31 there are a lot similarities between “`and “`32 the difference between X and Y lies in “`雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释，说明信息的能力，这些信息通常体现在图解，表格和插图中，这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候，也可以作为参考材料。1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of…over the period from…to…该表格描述了在…年之…年间…数量的变化。2. the bar chart illustrates that… 该柱状图展示了…3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding…该图为我们提供了有关…有趣数据。4. the diagram shows (that)… 该图向我们展示了…5. the pie graph depicts (that)…. 该圆形图揭示了… is a cure graph which describes the trend of…这个曲线图描述了…的趋势。7. the figures/statistics show (that)… 数据(字)表明…8. the tree diagram reveals how…该树型图向我们揭示了如何…9. the data/statistics show (that)…该数据(字)可以这样理解…10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…这些数据资料令我们得出结论…11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table…如图所示…12. according to the chart/figures… 根据这些表(数字)…13. as is shown in the table… 如表格所示…14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in…从图中可以看出，…发生了巨大变化。15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that…or it is clear/apparent from the chart that…从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到…16. this is a graph which illustrates…这个图表向我们展示了…17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from…to…该表格描述了…年到…年间a与b的比例关系。18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in…该图以圆形图形式描述了…总的趋势。19. this is a column chart showing… 这是个柱型图，描述了…20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of…如图所示，两条曲线描述了…的波动情况。21. over the period from…to…the…remained level.在…至…期间，…基本不变。22. in the year between…and… 在…年到…期间…23. in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998…1995年至1998三年里…24. from then on/from this time onwards… 从那时起…25. the number of…remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year).…月(年)至…月(年)…的数量基本不变。26. the number sharply went up to… 数字急剧上升至…27. the percentage of…stayed the same between…and……至…期间…的比率维持不变。28. the figures peaked at…in(month/year)…的数目在…月(年)达到顶点，为…29. the percentage remained steady at… 比率维持在…30. the percentage of…is slightly larger/smaller than that of……的比例比…的比例略高(低)。31. there is not a great deal of difference between…and……与…的区别不大。32. the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of…该图表表明…的数目增长了三倍。33. ..decreased year by year while…increased steadily.…逐年减少，而…逐步上升。…………太多了，还有需要，发邮件给我，我给你发邮箱里，[email protected]【北外雅思】，北京外国语大学旗下雅思培训品牌！学生学习生活均在北外校内，【北外雅思】=【名校】+【名师】=【包过】！

雅思范文作文(篇二)

Dear Sir/ Madam,

Dear Professor Moss,

I am Sandy, a junior student of the Department of Electrical and Computer Engineering. I am writing to enquire about your African Literature and Culture course.

Just a few days ago, I found the course when we were asked to choose optional courses for next semester. The name of African Literature and Culture aroused my great interest. Because of your reputation and my enthusiasm in literature, I hope I could study this course next semester. Except the name, however, all I know about the course is that it is a two-hour one held every Thursday afternoon. I want to get more details of the course. First of all, I would like to know the brief outline of the course. Moreover, I wonder if there are some relevant books that you can recommend for me to read before the course.

I also heard that another course of yours, Chinese Literature, is held every Friday afternoon. If the registration of this course hasn’t closed yet, I will be so glad to participate in your class.

Sorry to bother you. Your help will be greatly appreciated.

Yours sincerely,

Sandy

雅思范文作文(篇三)

每天都会收到烤鸭们发来许多表达感谢的私信，表示学习完这篇雅思写作攻略后，写作小分和总分都达到了要求，在2022申请季拿到了理想学校的offer。文章能帮助到那么多人，谢谢大家的支持！

震撼发布-------------

「雅思口语Part 1,2,3各题型攻略全解析」 ↓ ↓ ↓

---------------感恩各位！---------------

大家可以根据我下面的总结来查漏补缺，全文超过10000字，增增减减，花了超过两周时间才完成，为的是总结出最浓缩、最精华的方法给大家，里面内容可能是你需要花数个月到半年读几十本书才能获得的。

⚠️ 很多小伙伴觉得收藏就可以了，收藏 = 看了 = 学会了，那么小轩只想说：

雅思范文作文(篇四)

题目：Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文：

In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities. However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every university subject.

Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.

Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it is surely wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or fewer qualifications.

In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.

雅思范文作文(篇五)

In the year 1780, a river that ran/went along the north-south direction stretched through the western periphery/edge of the village. Immediately to its east was a vast expanse/plot/tract of farmland where farmers engaged in agricultural activities. The northeastern corner of the village was occupied by residential buildings that accommodated around 100 families. Overlooking from the homes to the south lay a sprawl of woods that took up almost a quarter of the land area of the village.

By the year 1860, significant/tremendous changes had taken place in the layout of settlements in the village. A bridge was built over the river, facilitating the communications and interactions between people on either side of the river. The area of farmland was halved to give way to the construction of a new road linking the river bank to the homes, whose number also doubled over the span of 80 years to 200. The tract of woodland was also significantly reduced, giving rise to vast areas of open, unused land.

The village indicated clear, visible signs of modern infrastructure in the year 2000. The population increased by nearly twofold, attaining 500. On the previously open land erected schools and sports fields for children to receive education and play sports. A new road was set up to make the travel between residential areas and schools more convenient. What's more, a line/stretch of shops was established along the eastern river bank in the downstream, heralding the advent of a commercial era. More impressively, a wetland formed at the southern end of the river, providing a shelter for birds in the region that retained the last vestige of the pristine nature amidst the full force of modernization elsewhere.

雅思范文作文(篇六)

1. 剑桥雅思真题

剑桥真题集答案部分是有官方范文（MODEL ANSWER）跟学生写的文章（就是之类的，就是学生写的）

官方给到的范文是非常具有参考意义的，可以用来积累词汇等等，同时官方给学生打了分的文章，大家可以拿来跟自己写的进行对比，看看自己的水平在哪。

2. 前雅思考官Simon 整理的范文

先说说Simon是谁，Smon是雅思前资深考官，在中国地区担任过雅思考官，考官嘛，肯定是非常了解雅思考试的备考技巧跟评分标准的，加上在中国当过雅思考官，自然对各位在写作中的问题很清楚，也知道高分范文需要的是什么，所以他的写作范文参考性极大极大极大！

个人觉得Simon的范文，文章不会用很多的高级词汇跟长难句，观点表达非常清晰，而且是从观点落到细节都非常的自然，说得直白一点，就是看完就是觉得这个人写的东西有道理，说服力强。

我非常建议冲击写作高分的朋友可以好好分析Simon的写作范文。

3. 顾家北手把手教你写雅思写作

这本书的话，我个人觉得比较适合小白去积累范文中的好词好句，分清楚写作的话题，跟构建框架，但是我不是很建议已经具备冲击写作高分基础的同学看这本书，怕你们看多了形成固定的思维模版了。

自学党们注意了，除了以上提到的带范文的资料外，我建议各位可以通过参考一些免费的公开课，私戳助教就能领取资料，获取已经整理好的写作范文，跟写作词汇等等，记得找助教领取完整的资料包，里面还有剑桥雅思真题，口语题库等等，领到就是赚到，还节约大笔时间在整理资料上面，别错过哦。

雅思范文作文(篇七)

I am writing to seek accommodation in the Snowy Mountains for agroup of students from Perth.

We expect to be the Snowy Mountains between June 1 and June 12. There are fourteen people in our group, five men and seven women, and a married couple. The five men will accept dormitory accommodation,and the women are happy to share rooms, but the married couple would like a double room. We hope to keep our expenses as low as possible.

Please tellme about recreational services in the area. The group will bring their own boots for bushwalking, but we are hoping to hire equipment for other sports, likes kiing. Some of our group will want to hire geological picks and other equipment, if possible. We also need to know about access to caves and other interesting geological features in the area.

I am looking forward toreceiving information about the Student Hostel Services and other facilities.

雅思范文作文(篇八)

The map shows the growth of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994.

It is clear that the village grew as the transport infrastructure was improved. Four periods of development are shown on the map, and each of the populated areas is near to the main roads, the railway or the motorway.

From 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood covered a small area next to one of the main roads. Chorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to this original village area. The village grew along the main road to the south between 1883 and 1922, and in 1909 a railway line was built crossing this area from west to east. Chorleywood station is in this part of the village.

The expansion of Chorleywood continued to the east and west alongside the railway line until 1970. At that time, a motorway was built to the east of the village, and from 1970 to 1994, further development of the village took place around motorway intersections with the railway and one of the main roads.

雅思范文作文(篇九)

雅思小作文2021真题范文，2021年4月3日雅思考试真题回忆及参考答案(附大小作文详细的雅思小作文范文及解析)。2021年5月7日雅思官方出品。2020年5月13日雅思官方出品。2020年1月12日雅思官方宣布，雅思小作文考试共计40题，其中小作文的题型占比为10% ，大作文的题型主要分为大作文和大作文两大类，大作文的题型包括大作文和小作文，大作文的题型包括了大作文和大作文两种。大作文题型包括大作文和小作文两部分，大作文的题干数量均为3题，大作文的题型均有涉及，大作文的题目数量也有增减，考生可以参考一下小作文的题型，如何高效利用大作文题型，快速提高小作文分数。

雅思范文作文(篇十)

剑桥雅思9test3小作文范文，雅思剑9写作test3task1范文用高分作文，这是一篇高质量的雅思作文范文。雅思高分作文，一共分为两个部分：第一部分，介绍task2和task2。第二部分，介绍了task3和task5的对比。在第一部分，我们需要明确task5的对比：task1和task6对比了，task5是对比了task4和task4，对比了task4，task4是对比了task4，task4是对比了task5，task4是对比了task6。在第二部分，我们需要了解task5和task5是对对对的，task3是对比了task6。这两部分我们需要准备的资料有：task1&writingandcoherence，task5是对照task3，task4是对着听力和阅读的学术性的对照。

雅思范文作文(篇十一)

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文章篇幅限制，字数已超载，以上是免费发布的全部内容了，Part 4-7补充题型的部分目前仅供加入课程的同学获取。↓ ↓ ↓

（添加好友时请求信息填写：知乎雅思）

各位烤鸭们不要忘记了：小作文在写作评分中占的比例是1/3，而占比2/3的大作文，才是我们备考时关注的重点，大作文几乎决定了写作全卷的好坏！！

雅思写作分数占比2/3的「雅思写作大作文备考体系」↓ ↓ ↓

雅思写作已达的烤鸭，小轩也准备了「读新闻学雅思作文：高级写作句型全积累」的连载文章 ↓ ↓ ↓

震撼发布：「雅思口语Part 1,2,3各题型攻略全解析」↓ ↓ ↓

小轩的研发、整理的：「雅思写作和口语免费与收费资料汇总」↓ ↓ ↓

写在最后：

各位小伙伴在学习完小作文的系统攻略后，接下来才是最重要的一步：主动练习→获得反馈→做出修改→复习总结。链条里环节，缺一不可。

根据我十年来的经验，经过这个流程练习5-10篇后，大多数学生的写作都可以提高分。

大家如果对小作文还有什么疑问的话，也可以直接评论，我看到的话都会尽量回复。

记住，对雅思考试原理的科学认识，到练习上、考试上的运用，最后再到分数上提升的完美落幕，是一个需要质变的过程，都是在检验每位烤鸭的批判力和意志力。

我见过太多学生雅思失败的例子，听过太多学生的“感人”故事了，小白们幻想各种花里胡哨的的考试技巧，企图“巧妙地”把雅思骗过，结果是四处碰壁，受了各种骗。

而高手注重的是科学、系统的备考体系，只要对雅思的认知是正确的，那么保证努力就自然不会白费，最终成绩的实现也必然是意料之中的事。

不要忘了点赞！不要忘了点赞！不要忘了点赞！我会创作更多超级干货分享给大家。

最后祝宝宝们都考到目标分数！

雅思范文作文(篇十二)

The diagrams of the coastal area of Brightsea illustrate its development from a fishing community in 1950 to a ferry terminal, with plans for future development.

In 1950 the coastal zone of Brightsea was undeveloped with just a light house and lighthouse keeper's house. There was a jetty for fishing boats, and a few cottages.

Currently, it can be seen that certain developments have taken place. For example, roads have been constructed and there is an hotel near the lighthouse. A large wharf is now supporting a ferry service. A cafe and shop are catering for the daily needs of the community.

There are plans for Brightsea to experience further growth. The hotel is to be extended and a sailing club built alongside the hotel, to the south. A second ferry wharf will be added with a telecommunications antenna and the shop replaced by a supermarket and car park. In the northern part of Brightsea, a restaurant and apartments will be built to supersede the cafe.

In summary, the coast of Brightsea has changed from being a fishing community in 1950 and is expected to become a more signigicant ferry terminal. The lighthouse will have been the only constant landmark.

雅思范文作文(篇十三)

Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldn't. Which do you think is good practice.

One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to.

Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.

Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.

Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that if the parents and their adult children do not live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other.

雅思范文作文(篇十四)

The Hawaiian island chain, in the centre of the Pacific Ocean, is approximately 2,700 km in length. It is formed of volcanoes and the active ones are at the south-east tip of the archipelago, where Hawaii itself is located.

It is believed that the chain began to form nearly 80 million years ago. Each island started to evolve after an eruption on the sea floor. First, a `hot spot' existed on the ocean bed, which let out a plume of material called magma. This magma may originate as deep as 2,883km below the ocean bed. Next, further eruptions took place, which built up the volcano. Eventually, it emerged above the surface of the ocean.

Since that time, the spume of magma has remained static as the Pacific tectonic plate moves in a north-west direction across it at a speed of 7-9cm per year. As it moves, a volcano forms as it passes over the hotspot and then become inactive when it has passed it.

雅思范文作文(篇十五)

题目：In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?

范文：

In my opinion, an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same rights and the same opportunities. I completely agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society.

Education is an important factor with regard to personal success in life. I believe that all children should have access to free schooling, and higher education should be either free or affordable for all those who chose to pursue a university degree. In a society without free schooling or affordable higher education, only children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the best learning opportunities, and they would therefore be better prepared for the job market. This kind of inequality would ensure the success of some but harm the prospects of others.

I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with people’s freedom to succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that people lose their motivation to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. On the contrary, I believe that most people would feel more motivated to work hard and reach their potential if they thought that they lived in a fair society. Those who did not make the same effort would know that they had wasted their opportunity. Inequality, on the other hand, would be more likely to demotivate people because they would know that the odds of success were stacked in favour of those from privileged backgrounds.

In conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between equality and personal success.

雅思范文作文(篇十六)

The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008. 这张图表提供了1999年至2008年间英国移民、移民和净移民的信息。

Both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for immigration were significantly higher. Net migration peaked in 2004 and 2007. 移民和移民率在这段时间内都有所上升，但移民人数明显更高。净移民在2004年和2007年达到顶峰。

In 1999, over 450,000 people came to live in the UK, while the number of people who emigrated stood at just under 300,000. The figure for net migration was around 160,000, and it remained at a similar level until 2003. From 1999 to 2004, the immigration rate rose by nearly 150,000 people, but there was a much smaller rise in emigration. Net migration peaked at almost 250,000 people in 2004. 1999年，超过45万人在英国生活，而移民的人数不到30万人。净移民人数约为16万人，直到2003年才达到类似水平。从1999年到2004年，移民率上升了近15万人，但移民人数却少了很多。2004年，净移民人数达到近25万人的峰值。

After 2004, the rate of immigration remained high, but the number of people emigrating fluctuated. Emigration fell suddenly in 2007, before peaking at about 420,000 people in 2008. As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240,000 in 2007, but fell back to around 160,000 in 2008.(159)

2004年之后，移民率仍然很高，但移民的人数却在波动。2007年移民突然减少，2008年达到了大约420,000人的峰值。结果，2007年净移民人数上升到24万，但在2008年又回落到16万左右。(159)

以上就是雅思小作文范文之雅思图表作文范文，更多优质雅思小作文范文即将上线，尽请期待。

雅思范文作文(篇十七)

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.

Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes,or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.

Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent is very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.

Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.

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雅思范文作文(篇十八)

1. 积累写作词汇

所以这里我说的积累写作词汇并不是让各位去可以去刻意去积累高级词汇，而是积累一些自己可以在写作里但是自己当时没有想到的词，或者想到了但是不会写的词

随便举个例子，剑10 Test 1 WRITING TASK 2 ：

我相信大家都知道，大作文第一段可以写成引入题目背景（改写）+表述自己观点

接下来一起来看看范文中的在第一段的第一句是如何引入题目背景的这句话的

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.

这句话说的：是孩子们在很小的时候就了解是非的区别是很重要的。

范文第一段第一句：One important stage in a child's growth is certainly the development of a conscience,which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong.

这句话说的是孩子成长的一个重要阶段当然是良心的发育，这与辨别是非的能力有关。

大家再注意到我标注的-conscience良心，跟stage阶段

引入题目的背景的时候，把句子整个同义替换是很low的，范文里面就把区别是非对错可以理解成跟良心的功能有关；小的时候的确就是我们人生中的某个阶段，这样一换，引入题目背景就很自然的同时，还体现了你对题目背景的合理延伸。

所以写作中词汇并不是越高级越好，而是需要你恰当表达意思的时候有恰当的词汇进行表达，能做到就很厉害了，像范文中这些自己没想到用或者想到了不会写的词汇难道不值得你积累下来吗。

2. 积累好用的句型

这里我说的积累好用句型，并不是指非要各位通篇都能做到长难句，而是恰当的意思用恰当的句子进行表达就好了

比如，剑10 Test 1 WRITING TASK 2 范文中的这句话（题目还是上面）

To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish,as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished.

惩罚一个年龄小的孩子是错误又愚蠢的，因为婴儿不明白发生了什么或为什么要惩罚他或她。

这个句子是由主句+原因状语从句构成，说明了惩罚小孩是错误又愚蠢的原因，因果关系显得有理有据。

那么as+句子表达原因的句型，大家就完全可以积累起来，不要碰上原因就统统写because...

3. 形成自己的写作框架

上面谈的词汇跟句型其实都是属于写作的细节，写作除了细节重要外，更加重要的是你的写作框架是否具有合理逻辑。

所以平时除了自己多写之外，记得多分析范文，形成一个自己的写作框架，比如我自己很喜欢的一个大写作框架就是分析Simon的范文形成的

个人见解，仅供参考，你杠你对

开头段：引入题目背景+明确表达自己的观点

主体段（2段）：核心论点-分论点（如有）-再展开论据-再重复核心论点（我觉得没必要，看自己）

注意：论据一定是可以去支持你论点的，别瞎套模版

结尾段：呼应开头段就行了，说白了，重申你的观点

请一定注意！！框架只是参考而已，个人有个人的喜好跟习惯！

最后自学党们，想要提升写作能力，除了积累写作词汇跟句型，多分析范文去形成自己的写作框架之外，还可以多参考高质量的免费公开课（主讲老师是曼切斯特大学语言学教授兼雅思前考官），直接学习大小作文的写法，好用的句型等等，学会了之后，自己多练习，写作不练习是不会有提高的，有条件的话找专业人士给你批改一下，提升得会更快。

雅思备考并不容易，尤其是像写作这种主观性题目，很多学校申请的时候还要看小分，就更加恶心了，所以各位心态放好，该多写就多写，不要让写作拖你出分的后腿。

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雅思范文作文(篇十九)

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小作文需要的准备、资料、模板其实不在于多，而在于精，关键是对写作思路有清晰了解，也就是在什么地方应该写什么内容，以及对核心写作语言的融会贯通。

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雅思范文作文(篇二十)

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break form studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge ad experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.

However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.

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